My attempt for the competition(not finished?maybe?)

[treemty]

Hey all,
i decided id try the competition so here is my mock up
please give me advice or comments

[IndyChav]

It's a competition, You give your entry not yoru entry with improvements basedo n other peopels opinions, However because i didn't see slim hackers thread ill let you off.

BUt jsut a note to all for future reference.

[Jumbo]

Seems a bit, Bland? Iono i just dont really like it. But good try