what is your question? yes the conections are correct. that looks like some of RDC's work. however this is a very simplistic mod, only it will be very labor intensive.
if you want my advice, look at the button pads, you see the trace comming off the pads to a small hole? scratch and solder at or near this hole, and not right on the pad as you have done. that will ensure that the origional buttons still work, and everything will close properly