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I wrote this a while ago, and just recently brought it back from the pits of my old English books,
I typed it up just now so let me know what you think
Death
I destroy homes, I tear families apart,
I’ll take your children, and that's just the start
I live with the rich; I live with the poor
I live down the street, and maybe next door
I have many names, but there's one you know best,
I'm sure you've heard of me, my name is Death
I let you live, maybe even grow old
But always remember, I own your soul.
I take kids from parents, and parents from kids,
I bring people to God, and I’ll separate friends.
I make you give up everything
Your family and your home,
Your friends and your money
But you’re never alone…
I'll take everything from you,
Your looks and your pride;
I'll always be with you
Right by your side…
I'll shut down your body; I'll control your mind,
I'll own you completely; your soul will be mine.
You knew this would happen, many times you were told,
Maybe, if you’re lucky, you will grow to be old.
I'll be your master, you are my slave,
I’ll be with you when you go to your grave.
I’m an unstoppable force, a complete dead end,
If you’ve lived life righteous, I will let you ascend,
But if you’ve live a life of evil,
On the past we will dwell,
I give you no choice; let me lead you to hell.
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I wrote this a while ago, and just recently brought it back from the pits of my old English books,
I typed it up just now so let me know what you think
Death
I destroy homes, I tear families apart,
I’ll take your children, and that's just the start
I live with the rich; I live with the poor
I live down the street, and maybe next door
I have many names, but there's one you know best,
I'm sure you've heard of me, my name is Death
I let you live, maybe even grow old
But always remember, I own your soul.
I take kids from parents, and parents from kids,
I bring people to God, and I’ll separate friends.
I make you give up everything
Your family and your home,
Your friends and your money
But you’re never alone…
I'll take everything from you,
Your looks and your pride;
I'll always be with you
Right by your side…
I'll shut down your body; I'll control your mind,
I'll own you completely; your soul will be mine.
You knew this would happen, many times you were told,
Maybe, if you’re lucky, you will grow to be old.
I'll be your master, you are my slave,
I’ll be with you when you go to your grave.
I’m an unstoppable force, a complete dead end,
If you’ve lived life righteous, I will let you ascend,
But if you’ve live a life of evil,
On the past we will dwell,
I give you no choice; let me lead you to hell.
reaper that is awesome we shud start a poetry thred here :)
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that is awsome reaper very pertaining (hope thats the right word) to your username
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that poem is awesome and i agree with ghost death wee should start a poetry thread but in the beginning there probaly will or will not be alot of people posting poems at the beggining but i sure will post some just let me find my poem book ok
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nice editting work dude:
I destroy homes, I tear families apart,
I take your children, and that’s just the start.
I’m more costly than diamonds, more precious than gold,
the sorrow I bring is a sight to behold.
If you need me, remember I'm easily found,
I live all around you in schools and in town.
I live with the rich I live with the poor,
I live down the street, and maybe next door.
I'm made in a lab, but not like you think,
I can be made under the kitchen sink.
In your child’s closet, and even in the woods.
If this scares you to death, well it certainly should.
I have many names, but there’s one you know me best,
I'm sure you've heard of me, I’m crystal meth.
My power is awesome, try me you'll see,
but if you do you will never break free.
Just try me once and I might let you go,
but try me twice and I'll own your soul.
When I possess you, you'll steal and you'll lie,
you will do what you have to just to get high.
The crimes you will commit for my narcotic charms,
will be worth the pleasure you'll feel in your arms, lungs or nose.
You'll lie to your mother, you'll steal from your Dad,
when you see their tears, you should feel sad.
But you will forget your morals and how you were raised,
I'll be your conscience, I'll teach you my ways.
I take kids from parents, and parents from kids,
I turn people from God, and separate friends.
I'll take everything from you, your looks and your pride;
I'll be with you always, right by your side.
You'll give up everything, your family, your home,
your friends, your money, then you'll be alone.
I'll take and take, till you have nothing more to give,
when I'm finished with you, you'll be lucky to live.
If you try me be warned this is no game.
If given the chance, I'll drive you insane.
I'll ravish your body; I'll control your mind,
I'll own you completely; your soul will be mine.
The nightmares I'll give you while lying in your bed,
the voices you'll hear, from inside your head.
The sweats, the shakes, the visions you'll see,
I want you to know, these are all gifts from me.
But then it's too late, and you'll know in your heart,
that you are mine and we shall not part.
You'll regret that you tried me they always do,
but you came to me, not I to you.
You knew this would happen, many times you were told,
but you challenged my power and chose to be bold.
You could have said no and just walked away.
If you could live that day over, now what would you say?
I'll be your master, you will be my slave.
I'll even go with you, when you go to your grave.
Now that you have met me, what will you do?
Will you try me or not? It's all up to you.
I can bring you more misery than words can tell,
come take my hand, let me lead you to hell.
Written by a young female ice user in prison
its still nice though
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Dedafmonteur, that's almost scary to read.
I just wrote one of the top off my head:
I am a monster, Gone in a blink of an eye
Seen once not twice, I'm there,not a alive
The voices you hear, from side to side
Screaming and shouting, praying for you to turn off the light
I creep inside you and make you cry
Take every thing away, every time
I am a monster
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nice editting work dude:
I destroy homes, I tear families apart,
I take your children, and that’s just the start.
I’m more costly than diamonds, more precious than gold,
the sorrow I bring is a sight to behold.
If you need me, remember I'm easily found,
I live all around you in schools and in town.
I live with the rich I live with the poor,
I live down the street, and maybe next door.
I'm made in a lab, but not like you think,
I can be made under the kitchen sink.
In your child’s closet, and even in the woods.
If this scares you to death, well it certainly should.
I have many names, but there’s one you know me best,
I'm sure you've heard of me, I’m crystal meth.
My power is awesome, try me you'll see,
but if you do you will never break free.
Just try me once and I might let you go,
but try me twice and I'll own your soul.
When I possess you, you'll steal and you'll lie,
you will do what you have to just to get high.
The crimes you will commit for my narcotic charms,
will be worth the pleasure you'll feel in your arms, lungs or nose.
You'll lie to your mother, you'll steal from your Dad,
when you see their tears, you should feel sad.
But you will forget your morals and how you were raised,
I'll be your conscience, I'll teach you my ways.
I take kids from parents, and parents from kids,
I turn people from God, and separate friends.
I'll take everything from you, your looks and your pride;
I'll be with you always, right by your side.
You'll give up everything, your family, your home,
your friends, your money, then you'll be alone.
I'll take and take, till you have nothing more to give,
when I'm finished with you, you'll be lucky to live.
If you try me be warned this is no game.
If given the chance, I'll drive you insane.
I'll ravish your body; I'll control your mind,
I'll own you completely; your soul will be mine.
The nightmares I'll give you while lying in your bed,
the voices you'll hear, from inside your head.
The sweats, the shakes, the visions you'll see,
I want you to know, these are all gifts from me.
But then it's too late, and you'll know in your heart,
that you are mine and we shall not part.
You'll regret that you tried me they always do,
but you came to me, not I to you.
You knew this would happen, many times you were told,
but you challenged my power and chose to be bold.
You could have said no and just walked away.
If you could live that day over, now what would you say?
I'll be your master, you will be my slave.
I'll even go with you, when you go to your grave.
Now that you have met me, what will you do?
Will you try me or not? It's all up to you.
I can bring you more misery than words can tell,
come take my hand, let me lead you to hell.
Written by a young female ice user in prison
its still nice though
Thats where I got most of the inspiration from, I actually had most of the poem written and I happened to get that in a chain email (in 8th grade), helped me get an A in Poetry Class
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still very nice reaper