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[Luke]

Hey I know my 16th birthday is still a year away, but mum promised me I could have a huge one, so I decided to make a promo (already I know, bit sad). I don't exactly really like it, and its actually not really original. but eh. I'm trying to look for new themes, so I can do something original, so if someone can help out that would be cool! [spoiler][/spoiler]
I'm so out of the scene at the moment so i've tried to create some quick sig.[spoiler][/spoiler]
iPhone Dock I made ages ago.[spoiler][/spoiler]
i'm Extremely bored at the moment so if anyone has any work needed done Hit me up!

[IndyChav]

Promo poster looks spot on!
The stock in the render needs something, The outline makes it look out of place
You could use the same sparkle effect on the left to make it look like the left side of her is fading away
Then draw over the left side outline with colours similar to the body but slightly darker?