The Devils Messenger - C+C Please :)

[H-Sauce]

Stock:



My design:



What do you guys think?

[gamerdude767]

damn... i love the way the curls around the man its awesome, but the lightning in the right hand corner seems.. i dont know how to explain but i doesnt look right ?

[robin1989]

aswome man you should to a sort how to type thing for it.

i do partially agree with gamerdude about the right lightening - if there was another figure coming out of that lightening it would look like an epic battle between the two beings

[DarkHawken]

Yeah i agree with the lighting, and also the guys face looks too strange but well done, love the lines around the body

[robin1989]

i like the face it gives it that demonic look

[H-Sauce]

I also realised that I muffed up the lightning around his head... I will redo it now, I just got to find another bloke who looks quite demonic.

[IndyChav]

The right lightning looks like a coloured dead tree o_O lol
The swirls nicely implemented
The bg of the stock is nice
and the text is pretty cool

However  I know i have a quite high contrast style of art but I think yorus tis too high contrast, Maybe tone it down a bit yeah? Or well theres a few thigns you could do but ill let you figure them out on your own

[H-Sauce]

I needed a high contrast to get that demonic look, hence the name devils messenger.

That is the best lightning that I have ever managed to pull off (Viva La Brushes).

But other than that thank you :P

[IndyChav]

you asked for criticism I gave you it

[H-Sauce]

I'm not complaining, And I thank you for it