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Scene 1 (Ship Under Attack)
« on: January 31, 2012, 04:40:08 AM »
For this scene it will be a side cut away of the ships hull two stories with people busy doing there shiply duties.

Suddenly the ship comes under attack on the lower deck people are franticly screaming and running around as aliens board the ship and start blasting people leaving them as little piles of carbon ash. Once all people on the lower deck are rendered into ash the aliens leave the scene heading for the upper deck. The precise moment the aliens leave the lower deck out from the janitorial closet comes our soon to be hero. He has his trusty Somy Spacemon on Rocking some space disco. So in-tuned with his environment and his cat like reflexes he notices nothing.... as he proceeds to sweep the floor where some idiot spilled some dirt he only pauses briefly to shake his groove thang..

As our hero finishes up on the lower deck oblivious to the wailing sounds of the ships sirens.. The crew member s don't fair so well on the upper deck. The aliens grab the warp core and the woman the hero has admired for a long time (probably for a in flight snack). The aliens make there way off the ship leaving our hero to clean up the mess.

Our hero makes his way to the upper deck wondering who left all the ash lying about. he continues to sweep and rock out the space disco. as our hero comes center focus on the upper deck the lights go out and a red spinning light drops for the ceiling at this point so into the disco our hero sweeps his feet to the left and points his right finger in the air then sweeps his feet to the right and points his left finger into the air.... (hmmm where have we seen this before?)
« Last Edit: January 31, 2012, 04:50:58 AM by SYSTEM aka (Cyberpyrot) »

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Re: Scene 1 (Ship Under Attack)
« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2012, 04:49:16 AM »
 "Battle:LA" with a little bit of "Undercover Borther" ..lol
« Last Edit: January 31, 2012, 04:49:58 AM by Tracey »
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Re: Scene 1 (Ship Under Attack)
« Reply #2 on: January 31, 2012, 04:52:14 AM »
I chuckled. Love the story so far.  :clap:

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Re: Scene 1 (Ship Under Attack)
« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2012, 04:52:54 AM »
"Battle:LA" with a little bit of "Undercover Borther" ..lol

hahaha LOL

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Re: Scene 1 (Ship Under Attack)
« Reply #4 on: January 31, 2012, 04:53:52 AM »
hahaha LOL I thought it would be funny with the john travolta move at the end

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Re: Scene 1 (Ship Under Attack)
« Reply #5 on: January 31, 2012, 09:01:35 AM »
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! I am totally diggin this.

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Re: Scene 1 (Ship Under Attack)
« Reply #6 on: February 01, 2012, 01:46:01 PM »
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! I am totally diggin this.

yeah there will be slap stick comedy at every turn

 

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